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MissKlarmic
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since 2003-02-20
Posts 70
Canada,N.S

0 posted 2003-02-25 08:55 PM



How worthless am i feeling
these pathetic attempts at healing
like a wall aginst my heart
striking through me like a dart
Wishing i could escape from this debate
Trying to sit here and concentrate
Thinking of the thorn that peirced me,
the wound that hasnt shed a tear
My heart has been drivin from glee
The way they took you away from me
I cant confess my love for you
For how do i confess something untrue
This is what you`ve done to me
A job well done for eternity.

© Copyright 2003 Lesley Anne Crowe - All Rights Reserved
Miah
Senior Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 1062
Pennsylvania
1 posted 2003-03-24 09:33 PM


"Thinking of the thorn that peirced me,
the wound that hasnt shed a tear"

Very powerful words.

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