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Shades of Morning Pass
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Shades of Morning Pass |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
It is the fade of morning I regret the most. That time when you Bathed in soft light Sleep unawares Of me memorizing The outlines of your face. Sometimes, I will touch your cheek Just one finger To know you Are real Know it is true You are here. You rustle in turn, Crisp cotton comfort Covering shoulders I would kiss awake Rolls away the years And I am awed Again As sun changes And day drives demands We are again separate And I am left Regretting The morning fade But filled With You |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
It is the fade of morning I regret the most. That time when you Bathed in soft light Sleep unawares Of me memorizing The outlines of your face. ============================== As sun changes And day drives demands We are again separate And I am left Regretting The morning fade But filled With You ======================= well this is just a sigh waiting to happen... soft and subtly sensual...very lovely poet sir. Love that opening verse....the first line pulls the reading in. Where the touch of lovers end and the soul of friends begin, |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A pink shade of remember... |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
This is love at it's best. One person not just in love with another, but deeply loving another...gives me shivers....another great love poem, you write so well. Enjoyed, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
So delicate and so powerful. Truly a favorite ThisDiamond |
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Etain Member
since 2003-02-22
Posts 92The moon... |
Lovely, expressed with sensitivity. Love, Etain. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You rustle in turn, Crisp cotton comfort Covering shoulders I would kiss awake Rolls away the years And I am awed Again ~~oh me, oh my, oh yea~~ Good on you Cpat~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sigh |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
once again.... incredible |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Cpat, Well done, I know the feeling. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Someone said the first line sucks the reader in. Hell, I want to marry you!!! Excellant work, powerful and beautiful. Susan |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Capt. Ron, so beautiful, Sir......  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
"It is the fade of morning I regret the most" here is an opening line that will not soon fade! Rf |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Ron, this is lovely, sweet friend, know it will always exist and you just have to believe it as love is wat makes everything possible! (big hugggssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ron, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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