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Jason Lyle
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since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438
With my darkling

0 posted 2003-02-25 07:23 PM


She sleeps
Should I wake her?
For all that
Is me
Wants to wake her

But I will not
For I would take her
And the wall
That has grown
Would make it
A fake slur

But I know
In my heart pure
We still love
and that love
Remains so
Pure

So when I
Finally,
Wake her
Our passion is
True,
I will
Take her


[This message has been edited by Jason Lyle (02-25-2003 07:52 PM).]

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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2003-02-25 07:25 PM


This is so beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

Connel
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since 2002-11-04
Posts 736
Florida, USA
2 posted 2003-02-25 07:26 PM


That was very nice Jason. This is a lot like the poem I just wrote a few minutes ago..

Anyone can write, But only poets can capture the heart.

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