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gemjop
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since 2002-11-18
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Pencilveinia, USA

0 posted 2003-02-25 06:25 PM



Speaking unseen
painting my tears black
camouflaged against the sky i stand beneath

In between melodies
that stars pass with each wink
i am rocked in arms that fill the mind

Impaled on the iron spike of anxiety
i sleep for relief
watching the window for word.

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2003-02-25 06:34 PM


Beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

Aenimal
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2 posted 2003-07-07 12:34 PM


foreshadowing..hugs brilliant writing

Wind
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3 posted 2003-07-31 06:31 PM


They aren't the only ones who enjoyed it. I was lost for a little while, but then I came back home. sorry i missed this one. I'm gonna go look for more

insanity is not a crime

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