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This song |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855
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This song plays on like a series of bells. The Sunday air rent by motions of air. Big heavy shapes colliding with waves. This song plays on like a series of bells. In a series of churches condemned on the street. A series of pews collect brightened waves of sounds from the summer pressing to panes in iron-dark tones and road weary sun. Staining the glass the color of wait. It's a color without presence or need. A color that turns the tongues of the sun to the snow of the moon and the seat of the sea. This song plays on like a series of bells. The Sunday night rent by motions of air. Light silver moon reflects on the beach. We drink to this song as it plays on. I know it's over. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"Staining the glass the color of wait. It's a color without presence or need. A color that turns the tongues of the sun to the snow of the moon and the seat of the sea." you just turned me inside out with this one. (and Mikie? just what the hell are ya doing in that pic? You don't need brain food--you are brain food.  ) |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent write Mike... and just what are you doin' in that pic? Takin' a bite out of that skull? lol. ~Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
enjoyed the read........lol, wondering about the same question as above........  Charisma |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Heh heh. Glad you enjoy the poem and the pic. The poem came to me after hearing "Just Like Heaven" by the Cure on the radio -- a song that holds special meaning. And the picture was too strange not to share. Plastic Brain Eater |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
Loved poem. No comments on the pic  Sunkissed."I have to hurry past the moon...to Jupiter..." |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I loved the poem and I liked the new picture, if you'd left the eating brain food out of the skull out of it...HeeHee!!LOL Hugs, Ethel |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh my gosh, I LOVE The Cure, their videos are some of the strangest I've ever seen but that is what makes them unique and I love that! (big hugggssssss) as for that picture, hehehe, your poetry sure is inspiring brain food, hehehe, I love the cleverness in it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michael, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
nice poem...but a mind is terrible thing to bite. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Now you all know my method of writing.  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Staining the glass the color of wait. It's a color without presence or need. A color that turns the tongues of the sun to the snow of the moon and the seat of the sea. This song plays on like a series of bells. The Sunday night rent by motions of air. Light silver moon reflects on the beach. We drink to this song as it plays on. ======================= and I could eat your poetry with a spoon. this ROCKS...the imagery is soooooooo cool. Where the touch of lovers end and the soul of friends begin, |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
*cowers in her corner* sometimes I question whether I truly belong amongst great creative masterpieces such as this..and great poets such as you..no seriously..I'm being honest..and brutually harsh on meself..*sigh* grr on my insecurities!!! blah If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Glad you enjoyed this view, Janet. Ceinwyn, nonsense. We all have our place. And if you ever feel like you're taking yourself to seriously, find a really stupid photo of yourself and make it your pip image. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
This was penned well! Ummm One question! That stuff tastes better with a little salt no??  |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Always found it to be very bland, much like paper mache in taste.... But this! Doggone it squirrel dude! You truly have a gift. Ed |
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