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Sunkissed
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0 posted 2003-02-25 02:58 PM



He calls me some silly name
that rhymes with my middle
& tickles my fancy
like loving in early morning
brandy eyes sparkle
dark brows quirk
& deep dimpled grin
puts me in a spin
again
"If you could have
anything you want,
anything in the world,"
my Genie asks, "what would
it be?"
I bite my lip, then his
with sensual nip
close my eyes &
wish...


Sunkissed.

"I have to hurry past the moon...to Jupiter..."

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Ericc
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since 2003-01-31
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1 posted 2003-02-25 03:53 PM


This is lovely.
Eric

Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
2 posted 2003-02-25 04:14 PM


Oh how lovely this is, and I hope your Genie grants your every wish!! Enjoyed!!

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy soul, and let the magik happen!  ~~S~~

GoldenIllusions111
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since 2003-02-25
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3 posted 2003-02-25 04:15 PM


I had to laugh..this is such a playful and sweet female thought of a poem..really enjoyed this....good write!

Golden*

Sunkissed
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since 2002-12-03
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4 posted 2003-02-25 05:15 PM


Thank you all for your kind comments!


Sunkissed.

"I have to hurry past the moon...to Jupiter..."

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