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GoldenIllusions111 Junior Member
since 2003-02-25
Posts 18 |
Like rain you cover me when I am asleep, alone you watch me from me and grasp the earth I walk on. Your hands are purest heart but your words are my actions inside a reflection of mirrors in brilliant moons where fires rest and giving breath so that I may live as natural and without needs of course, you, you climb with me and we fall, feathers crush us in two and one such we become a trinity, Morpheus. Golden* |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions, GoldenIllusions. I really think you're going to find much here to offer you, so sit back, enjoy, and find yourself in a poetry world like nothing else the Web has to offer... Karilea |
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GoldenIllusions111 Junior Member
since 2003-02-25
Posts 18 |
How very kind of you! The greeting card is so beautiful, I sent it to myself for safe keeping....WOW..... Golden* |
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Minister Joe Member
since 2003-02-22
Posts 78TX, USA |
Golden, Welcome ~~ this is a nice introduction. I do like how the rhythm does speed up towards then end of this work along with the imagery. Thank you for sharing this, --Matt Give what you have. To someone, it may be better than you dare to think. |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
welcome! |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
Awesome.  Sunkissed."I have to hurry past the moon...to Jupiter..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS! Very nicely done first post! I look forward to seeing more of your work. ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Welcome to Passions, and I truly enjoyed your first post here Charisma |
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GoldenIllusions111 Junior Member
since 2003-02-25
Posts 18 |
Matt..Thank you for such kindness... Golden* Nights.Thank you poet. Golden* Brad....Thank you. Golden* Nancy.....Thanks you shall.... Golden* Charisma.Thank you so much. Golden* |
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GoldenIllusions111 Junior Member
since 2003-02-25
Posts 18 |
I just want to thank all of you for making me feel so very welcome in this forum. Golden* |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
GOLDEN  I really enjoyed your first post, and look forward to reading much more of your work. I think you will like it here amongst our big "Family Of Friends" at PIP. I sure do hope so. . . Hugs, Ethel.....garysgirl |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"your words are my actions inside a reflection of mirrors in brilliant moons" That's my favorite line. Welcome to Passions! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
lovely first post! I enjoyed! Welcome to Passions! |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Hi Golden.... WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!!! I enjoyed your poem!!!!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Andre Brink |
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GoldenIllusions111 Junior Member
since 2003-02-25
Posts 18 |
Ethel....Thanks for such kindness toward my work and your warm welcome. Golden* Rara..Thank you so very much. Golden* Shadows.....I am so pleased. Thank you for such kindness. Golden* Bridgette...Thank you dear soul! Golden* |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Yay! You truly rise like a golden butterfly in this scintillating debut, sweet friend, always spread those feathers and rise with the trinity of grace as your golden heart reflects all of loves grandest qualities, yay, I love it!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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GoldenIllusions111 Junior Member
since 2003-02-25
Posts 18 |
Noah...........Thank you once again....You all are so very kind in this forum....... Golden* |
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