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Decaflame
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0 posted 2003-02-25 01:30 PM



Necks swan in slight reach
Tulips bleeding touch of red
Heart of palm shall feed

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INclan
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1 posted 2003-02-25 01:33 PM


Ha!  I hope to be the first to respond.  I so enjoy the Japanese forms.  Thank you for sharing your creation with us.

INclan

Cpat Hair
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2 posted 2003-02-25 01:48 PM


very nicely done... I enjoyed.

Robert Frazier
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3 posted 2003-02-25 01:50 PM


well done!

Rf

GoldenIllusions111
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4 posted 2003-02-25 01:52 PM


I adore haiku.....  this one is  beautiful.... the visuals are a definite RED..lovely!

Golden*

Enchantress
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5 posted 2003-02-25 02:27 PM


Beautiful Deca!
So good to see you here!
~Hugs & Smiles~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

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6 posted 2003-02-25 02:33 PM


Hello Deca! This is lovely....simply lovely. Swans were in flight over our river a week ago..which is odd for this time of year. hugs to you, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

Sudhir Iyer
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7 posted 2003-02-25 03:26 PM


very very nice...

regards,
sudhir

garysgirl
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8 posted 2003-02-25 04:53 PM


Very beautiful. I really do
love these.  


Hugs,
Ethel

IcyFlamez89
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9 posted 2003-02-25 05:20 PM


It's great. Beautiful imagery
Mistletoe Angel
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10 posted 2003-02-26 01:50 PM




(smiles) This is wonderfully rich imagery, sweet friend, here's hoping the pain will subside soon, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Decaflame, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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