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Open Poetry #25

Let Me Burn

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-02-25 11:21 AM

Let Me Burn

I wish
to hold you
in divineness
but how
can I give
something
I am not
fleeting moment…
happiness
call my name
surely you
and only you
can resuscitate me
and if desire
be heat
let me burn

"Don't let the mistakes of your past be the journey of your future."

Robert Frazier
Senior Member

since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

1 posted 2003-02-25 01:10 PM

powerful,intimate confession of beautiful strength and fragility.

Rf

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2003-02-25 01:16 PM

1slick_lady
That was a slick end LOL enjoyed.

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

3 posted 2003-02-25 03:57 PM

Yes...very powerful.
Eric

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