Tick-ta (Grace of the Sky)

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aries_luv_ppl
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since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

0 posted 2003-02-24 06:09 PM

Tick-ta (Grace of the Sky)

Tick-ta, Tick-ta,
Alone in my room
Listening to the...regular beats.

The sky is covered
By the black cloth
Smoothly spreaded
As a roof of the city.

There must be two angels
At each end of the sky
Holding... the cloth
Making waves-
And the waves would be our clouds
Waltzing across in beautiful grace.

Each clouds has different shapes,
Like the variety people in the ball.
But all are imaginative reflection of thoughts.
And being one of them,
I shall not feel alone anymore.

Just when I was in my happiest hour,
A bird awake me in her whisper.
I'm alone
Again...
In my room.

(c)Feb 24, 2003
Eliza Simmons

~Every girl has a dream within.

[This message has been edited by aries_luv_ppl (02-24-2003 10:35 PM).]

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-02-24 06:10 PM

I really enjoyed this one.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2003-02-24 06:36 PM

Eliza~
Hoping that my comment and vote this morning on this one counted .... if not, I say again that I've not seen lovelier thoughts than these -

'There must be two angels
At each end of the sky
Holding... the cloth
Making waves-
And the waves would be our clouds
Waltzing across in beautiful grace.'

Voting ... and we'll let Ron decide if I already did or not~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2003-02-24 06:41 PM

(big hugggssssss) Oh Eliza, this is sooooooo beautifully heartaching, sweet friend, it may not feel like this for now but soon love will find your heart, I am sure of it and the ticking clocks will represent skipped heartbeats! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is precious, we all love you so much, you have my vote! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eliza, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

4 posted 2003-02-24 10:27 PM

thanks all for replying but I think I will withdrawl this one and saved it for latter run.

~Every girl has a dream within.

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

5 posted 2003-02-25 03:34 AM

I tried to vote but couldn't. I know you know I like this one. Joyce

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