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Open Poetry #25

Your Name Written

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-02-25 07:15 AM

Your Name Written

there is
too much space
in these
lonely nights
I want more
the trace
of warmth
in the signature
of touch
write your name
tender inking mark
upon my skin
I am
blank pages
in a
message to you

"Don't let the mistakes of your past be the journey of your future."

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

1 posted 2003-02-25 07:43 AM

and I just have a feeling, my friend, that those blank pages will not stay that way for long!! This is so beautiful, as all of your writings are.....

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy soul, and let the magik happen! ~~S~~

Thomas119gold
Senior Member

since 2002-06-03

Posts 708
Biloxi, MS (city by the sea)

2 posted 2003-02-25 02:14 PM

Sometimes words my not be enough
but written speech seems to have the right touch

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

3 posted 2003-02-25 03:10 PM

there is
too much space
in these
lonely nights
I want more

yes. nights can indeed leave you wanting more to fill the space than words... not written on your skin..

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

4 posted 2003-02-25 03:50 PM

There is a beautiful longing to these words.
I could feel this deeply within.
Eric

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.