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Sunnyone
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0 posted 2003-02-25 06:51 AM



The art of Josephine Wall


I wish for you the sky, the stars
The deep and shining seas
I wish for you to have the world
And to share your world with me...

I wish for days of holding hands
While stealing kisses sweet
With rainbows high above our heads
Cool meadows at our feet...

Of all the wishes that are held
Within my gypsy heart
The greatest wish of all, my love
Is that we never part...




Accept these small gifts from my gypsy soul, and let the magik happen!  ~~S~~

© Copyright 2003 Sunnyone - All Rights Reserved
Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2003-02-25 08:10 AM




(smiles) Yay!!! Oh Sunnyone, this is soooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, your beautiful heartfelt words along with Josephine's lovely artwork makes the poem sing with colors, yay! (kiss on cheek) This has my happy vote, sweet friend, yay, this made me smile, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sunnyone, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

secretlife
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2 posted 2003-02-25 08:25 AM


I wish for days of holding hands
While stealing kisses sweet
With rainbows high above our heads
Cool meadows at our feet...

--------------------

Sunnyone.....

Dear these are really touching and soft wards..
I Love the meaning of it...

The picture too is sooo nice..
Thanx alot for writting this and let us
learn new meanings of love life....

Keep writting coz I will be waiting for that...

Hugssssss


[This message has been edited by secretlife (02-25-2003 08:27 AM).]

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2003-02-25 08:45 AM


Sunnyone
Now that's a wish I can see. Enjoyed

Sunshine
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4 posted 2003-02-25 08:47 AM



May you always know
gypsy love!

SmartChick
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5 posted 2003-02-25 09:00 AM


And, may your wish always be true.
Justbleu
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6 posted 2003-02-25 09:13 AM


Truly a wonderful wish....

Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


JamesMichael
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7 posted 2003-02-25 11:06 AM


Enjoyed...James
Goldboat
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8 posted 2003-02-25 11:23 AM


I really enjoyed the poem and the picture!
Charisma
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9 posted 2003-02-25 03:55 PM


Beautiful....beautifully penned

Charisma

Paula Finn
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10 posted 2003-02-25 04:01 PM


Beautiful love...Ive missed being here
Sunnyone
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11 posted 2003-02-25 04:06 PM


Hi Noah, and thank you....glad you enjoyed the colours of this....that's what life is full of!!

Hi secretlife, and it's so nice to share thoughts with new friends...thank you!

Hi Sy!!  Yes, there are some wishes that one can reach out and take hold of...I've been blessed in finding mine!!  Thank you, my dear friend!

Hi Sunshine, and yes...as long as my gypsy heart beats, I will share love with my soul-mate...thank you, sis!!

Hi Sue, and that is so sweet of you...thank you for your good thoughts!

Hi Bridgette, and thank you too!!  I wish this kind of love for everyone...the world would be such a beautiful place if it happened that way!!

Hi JM, and thank you...it's always nice to see you in response!!

Hi Goldboat, and I'm glad that you enjoyed my humble efforts here!!  Let me also say a hearty...'Welcome to Passions!'



Accept these small gifts from my gypsy soul, and let the magik happen!  ~~S~~

[This message has been edited by Sunnyone (02-25-2003 04:09 PM).]

Sunnyone
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12 posted 2003-02-25 04:08 PM


Hi Charisma, and I do so appreciate your vote!!

Hi Paula!!!!!!   You have been sorely missed, and it is so very wonderful to see you again!  Email me, ok?? Thank you!!!!


Accept these small gifts from my gypsy soul, and let the magik happen!  ~~S~~

[This message has been edited by Sunnyone (02-25-2003 04:10 PM).]

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13 posted 2003-02-25 04:21 PM


Oh yes, Sunny...I agree wholeheartedly where my Love is concerned, too...

A very good book submission, by the way.

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~  
                  

Sunnyone
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14 posted 2003-02-25 04:25 PM


Hi garysgirl, and yes...this one is written with a 'forever' love in mind!!  I know that you are in such a relationship, so I'm really glad that I can share it with you!! Thank you, my friend!!

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy soul, and let the magik happen!  ~~S~~

[This message has been edited by Sunnyone (02-25-2003 04:25 PM).]

Goldboat
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15 posted 2003-02-26 05:26 PM


Sunnyone:

I have translated the poem into Chinese here. If you agree, I will post it to some web sites in Chinese, such as: http://www.toppoem.com/list.asp?boardid=15 http://www.likk.com/cgi-bin/forums.cgi?forum=34 http://www.poemlife.com.cn/forum/list.jsp?forumID=6 http://www.liufangdi.com/index_2.asp http://www2.bbsland.com/cgi-bin/tea.cgi

Thank you for your good poem.


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Bill Charles
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16 posted 2003-02-26 05:27 PM


Sunny - I could have sworn that I replied to this one, but I don't see it. Anyway, my vote for you for this writing...

BC

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17 posted 2003-02-26 06:16 PM


What a wonderful wish!
Much enjoyed.
~Hugs~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

vandana
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18 posted 2003-02-26 06:47 PM


nice
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19 posted 2003-02-27 02:07 AM



And my greatest wish is that you never stop writing and posting.
This is just gorgeous, Sunny...I love it.
Hugs to you, friend,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Sunnyone
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20 posted 2003-02-27 07:58 AM


Hello Goldboat, and I would be honoured if you wish to post it to these sites, or others that you frequent!!  Thank you so much, as I am drawn to Chinese art forms, and would be delighted to have my work translated!!  Once again, thank you!#

Hello BC, and it could be that you saw it on the actual book forum, as dual postings are accepted there, (from the other forums). Thank you, my friend....so glad you enjoyed!

Hello Enchantress, and thank you!! My dream is for all of my friends and family to enjoy wishes such as these...what a wonderful world it would be!

Hello Vandana, and I thank you!!!  Always a pleasure to have you stop in for a visit!

Hello Vicky!!!  Oh, thank you, dear friend, and I hope to be writing for quite some time to come yet!!! ~~huggs~~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy soul, and let the magik happen!  ~~S~~

Nan
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21 posted 2003-03-02 09:16 AM


I love it...
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