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0 posted 2003-02-24 11:03 PM



Even as I drink
The sunset refills my cup
With a liquid gold.

© Copyright 2003 Ed Ratledge - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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1 posted 2003-02-24 11:13 PM


Beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

Martie
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2 posted 2003-02-24 11:15 PM


As my cup is filled
it spills onto my carpet
dappled glow of moon

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3 posted 2003-02-24 11:19 PM


Luminous silence...
only color fills the space
between night and day.

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4 posted 2003-02-25 02:12 AM


Beautiful sunset
Purple, red, golden orange,
Color before night

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5 posted 2003-02-25 02:28 AM


Soft, Diana's moon
Arrow tip's bright white approach
Dark, gentley asleep.

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6 posted 2003-02-25 03:30 AM




Dream astral vision
Heaven's face a veil of stars
earrings moon and sun.
.
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..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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7 posted 2003-02-25 11:37 AM


What folly
Wine provokes laughter
a fools cup

paladin

....a knight without armor

Jason Lyle
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With my darkling
8 posted 2003-02-25 11:45 AM


My glass now empty
Cast bright rainbows on the floor
Sunlight brings me love

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9 posted 2003-02-25 12:06 PM


Sun gives a rainbow,
The moon brings rainbow shadows;
What will the stars share?

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regards2you
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10 posted 2003-02-25 12:07 PM




This was supposed to be after Jason's


.

Warm rays enflame heart
Thoughts of your butterfly kisses
Feather me into Spring.

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..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"


[This message has been edited by regards2you (02-25-2003 09:57 PM).]

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11 posted 2003-02-25 12:21 PM




For after Ed's....


.
Spring stars highlight you
Sweet breath breezes shiver spine,
Perfect pot of gold.
.

Sorry, Ed's bet. Jason/mine; got out of order, that's all from me for awhile.. smiles,  

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..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"
  

[This message has been edited by regards2you (02-25-2003 01:43 PM).]

regards2you
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12 posted 2003-02-25 12:34 PM


None of last five coming up on screen and I go through printer to read them; am unable to add spaces bet. poem and note of my last entry. will be offline to be able to fix it.  
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13 posted 2003-02-25 12:37 PM


Having fun until
A man said he might kiss me --
Oops, the wrong rainbow!

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Jason Lyle
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14 posted 2003-02-25 12:46 PM


not my rainbow........
Jason

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15 posted 2003-02-25 12:56 PM


drink up!  Beautiful!

Rf

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16 posted 2003-02-25 12:59 PM


Ratleader
Good one, Enjoyed.

Nan
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17 posted 2003-02-25 09:50 PM


Sunrise on Cape Cod
Sunsetting over Big Sur
Hop a westward plane

ThisDiamond
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18 posted 2003-02-25 10:45 PM


Well done. TD
IcyFlamez89
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19 posted 2003-02-25 10:56 PM


Follow the Sunrise.
Trailing its crimson beauty,
One reawakens.

INclan
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20 posted 2003-02-25 11:20 PM


in the wine of days
if friends are the spice of life
my cup overflows

lucky
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21 posted 2003-02-26 03:31 AM


interesting thread of senryu.

lucky dale

Speaking of ghosts, and after such an eternity. . .wouldn't you know, here comes mine again...
~Rosemary J. Gwaltney~


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