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sellout007
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0 posted 2003-02-24 05:04 PM



I write what I feel,
what my heart desires.

With no boundaries or schemes,
except that of love.

So i write of you,
my sweet flower.

For within you,
I have found what I love.

A dream is but a dream, you can wake up.  Reality is ultimate, and those who share it with us are far more important than anything we could remember,

© Copyright 2003 Daniel Kelly - All Rights Reserved
1slick_lady
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1 posted 2003-02-24 05:07 PM


damn i love this.........h
garysgirl
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2 posted 2003-02-24 05:11 PM


This is soooo good....

Ethel...garysgirl

sellout007
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3 posted 2003-02-24 09:18 PM


Makes me very happy that you too enjoyed this so much! *proud smile*

A dream is but a dream, you can wake up.  Reality is ultimate, and those who share it with us are far more important than anything we could remember,

regards2you
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4 posted 2003-02-25 10:45 AM




I find this simple poem quite precious.


Enjoyed, Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2003-02-25 11:14 AM


Nice writing...James
inkedgoddess
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6 posted 2003-02-25 06:35 PM


young love,
oohhh so sweet,

sellout007
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7 posted 2003-02-25 06:40 PM


regards2you - Precious...that she is!

JamesMichael - Thanks glad you enjoyed it.

inkedgoddess - I know i look like im 15 but im actually 23 in May. o) I dunno if thats old, but i dont think its young. Im stuck in the middle somewhere *lol* Thanks for the words!

A dream is but a dream, you can wake up.  Reality is ultimate, and those who share it with us are far more important than anything we could remember,

sellout007
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8 posted 2003-03-04 03:19 PM


adding to library

A dream is but a dream, you can wake up.  Reality is ultimate, and those who share it with us are far more important than anything we could remember,

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