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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-02-24 04:56 PM


Sweet Stream

I like
the rain
it is
a gentle river
flowing from
the sky
kissing
my skin
soaking
my thunder


"Don't let the mistakes of your past be the journey of your future."


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Cpat Hair
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1 posted 2003-02-24 05:30 PM


very nice.. softly sensual...

I enjoyed.

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31
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2 posted 2003-02-24 05:47 PM


This fills me with a sense of appreciation for the elements.
Thank you,
Eric

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