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0 posted 2003-02-24 04:53 PM


Whisper
Sensual sound
Spoken very softly
Cause passionate feelings to stir
Heart Voice
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.
.

(This is the first one of these I have ever written. Is it okay? I love all these little verses.)



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1 posted 2003-02-24 04:54 PM



Yes!
More than
Right...

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2 posted 2003-02-24 04:54 PM


Very well done,Ethel..

believe in what your heart feels...

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..............psssst

.....this is sweet......a tasty cinquain....

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4 posted 2003-02-24 05:03 PM


Thank you, Karilea!!!! I just noticed that Bridgette had posted one, too. I hope Nan sees them.  

Heart Hugs,
Ethel

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5 posted 2003-02-24 05:04 PM


Thanks, Scorpio. That was fun to write.

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~  
                  

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6 posted 2003-02-24 05:06 PM


Thank you, Ed. I'm glad that you think
so.

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~  
                  

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7 posted 2003-02-24 05:14 PM


Ah...yes!!!  ME LIKES!!!!

Bridgette

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8 posted 2003-02-24 05:42 PM


Great work!
This is beautiful.
Eric

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9 posted 2003-02-24 06:54 PM




Eythel,

Congratulations on doing such a fine job. Glad to see you branching out a little. Plus! It is beautiful.

Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
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10 posted 2003-02-24 08:22 PM




(smiles) Oh Ethel, this is excellent, sweet friend, the form is perfect, I am so happy to see you trying these too, yay, you are just amazing, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

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11 posted 2003-02-24 09:10 PM


Well Ethel, I think you did this very good.
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12 posted 2003-02-24 10:34 PM


Bridgette,
Thank you!! I like yours, too...
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Eric,
thank you very much......
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Pat,
Thank you , sweetie. It was fun to try.
.
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Heart Hugs to you all,
Ethel

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (02-24-2003 10:35 PM).]

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13 posted 2003-02-24 10:40 PM


Noah,
there you go...
saying just the right thing again...
.
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Sue,
thank you very much, friend.
I tried to do it right.....
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Heart Hugs  
Ethel

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nice
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15 posted 2003-02-25 05:30 AM


Ethel, you have the ciquain form down prefectly, and how beautifully you express it.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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16 posted 2003-02-25 07:04 AM


nice ethel,
nice choice of poetry, both content and context

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17 posted 2003-02-25 01:51 PM


This is softly beautiful, gg... well done! *S*
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18 posted 2003-02-25 05:23 PM


Kethry,
Thank you for your sweet reply...
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Michele,
I appreciate you nice words....
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Suthern,
Thank you. I appreciate your sweet reply.  
.
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Hugs to all of you,
Ethel

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