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Saddened Storm
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Krystopher Morris Member
since 2002-11-11
Posts 130Ancient land called Chivalry |
Saddened Storm The quiet storm lingers in Just as precise as a fingers bend It waits to see it's tears flood free Then runs away to act and play It's winds run wild screaming like a lost child Poetry is love and love is life. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Wow, I like what you do with words! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
You are beautiful with words. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Great job!  |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Great writing .... I enjoyed this so much. Hugs, Marti Dwelling on the negative simply |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
You manipulate words oh so right....LOVED IT!!!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very very nicely done! Enjoyed! ~ Trace my body with your words.. And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~ [This message has been edited by Enchantress (02-24-2003 10:28 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Oh Krystopher, this is so very sad, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and I hope now the child in your heart has found it way home again and the rainbow smile has emerged through the clouds! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, you have my vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Krystopher, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
short but point ~Every girl has a dream within. |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
That Is truly lovly. I reaslly HONESTLY loved it.. Im votin for it man.. lol Anyone can write, But only poets can capture the heart. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
What a vivid picture you painted of a violent act of nature in such a few words, well done! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Yes, as everyone said, you do have a way with words, Krystopher...  "Love makes the world go around" ~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~ [This message has been edited by garysgirl (02-25-2003 01:45 AM).] |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
the winds as I stepped outside today were just like that child... and BRRR it was cold. this is good, I like it. Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very good writing! |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Nice ache. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Good job...it's not a long poem but you certainly got the feeling across.  |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Great poem with an even better message Dawn |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I like this, KM... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
YEP! Short and fierce, some storms are like a child's tantrum. (Hopefully both short, anyway!) |
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