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scorpio
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0 posted 2003-02-24 02:57 PM


Magic

Magic in her soul
And the touch of her soft hand
Makes my smile appear.

believe in what your heart feels...

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1 posted 2003-02-24 02:58 PM



I'm glad for her
because it brings us

this!

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2 posted 2003-02-24 03:04 PM


a gentle reminder...that it often the simple touch of another that brings us peace..and joy

enjoyed...

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3 posted 2003-02-24 03:06 PM


Lovely scorpio!! Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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4 posted 2003-02-24 03:45 PM


A most wonderful haiku Scorpio....there's a touch such as this that will be forever etched on my soul.  

Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


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5 posted 2003-02-24 04:18 PM



Scorpio, this is the most beautiful haiku I have seen from you...
and you are becoming quite adept with this style of writing.
Somewhere there is one very lucky lady if she inspired you to write this.
Perfectly penned poet sir!  What a pleasure for the senses.
Mind if I keep this one?  I find it utterly amazing!
I think you just melted the foot of snow we have outside.
May we see more magic please?
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy Lee~


~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

scorpio
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6 posted 2003-02-24 04:44 PM


Thank you, Karilea...I'm so pleased you liked this..

Ron, you're absolutely right...the simple things make a significant difference..

Chris...thank you...that was very kind of you to say..

I know how you feel Bridgette...I have a similar touch...etched into my soul..

Nancy, I'm so honoured you want this for your library...your support mean a great deal to me...and I'm please you enjoy my haikus and senyrus....I enjoy the challenge they present...and yes I'll do more...my muse has much magic to show me..

believe in what your heart feels...

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7 posted 2003-02-24 08:23 PM


This is SO beautiful!!

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8 posted 2003-02-24 08:27 PM




(smiles) Oh Scorpio, this is so gorgeous, sweet friend, your senryus are always such a pleasure to read, you truly are the Merlin of poetic magic, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Scorpio, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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9 posted 2003-02-24 08:30 PM




You captured something very special, amazingly in so few words.

I really like this.


Hugs< Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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10 posted 2003-02-24 09:01 PM


Awww, this is beautiful Scorpio.
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11 posted 2003-02-25 04:29 AM


very nice
scorpio
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12 posted 2003-02-25 08:19 AM


Enchantress...thanks for the bump...*S*

Noah...thank you for your kind words...you humble me..

regards2you...I'm glad you enjoyed this...thank you..

Your comments are most appreciated, SmartChick..

Thank you for stopping in passing shadows..

believe in what your heart feels...

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