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kram
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0 posted 2003-02-24 02:23 PM


She Sleeps

She sleeps…
her gown
smooth as a symphony
flutters across milky skin
as the wind
whipping curtains
blows September
through her delicate dreams

she wakes…
A leaf
floats as though rocked
in an invisible cradle and
comes to rest
on pillow-white snow
calling October
through her open window

~Kram~

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2003-02-24 02:25 PM



A lovely vision, Kram...

Darksoul
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2 posted 2003-02-24 03:42 PM


I loved the imagery you used in this one
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3 posted 2003-02-24 05:32 PM


nicely done... I enjoyed
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4 posted 2003-03-17 10:54 PM


Very lovely!!!!
Bridgette

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5 posted 2003-03-17 11:00 PM


Simply lovely!

~ Sweet dreams!
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6 posted 2003-03-18 04:03 AM


WOW! I loved this!
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