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Pondering Love
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Pondering Love |
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Darksoul Member
since 2003-01-31
Posts 61 |
Dare I beseech thee? to grace my virgin soul with poetic melody honey sweet crafted by heaven's angelic host Dare I walk a path where feet where feet never trod? Onward toward uncertain futures waiting to be born hopes of the heights of love unattained lore of passion's caress Dare I proclaim from mountain's peak guarded secrets for fear my heart can scarcely utter? To say the words "I love you" seems but a simple thing but all but impossible behind locked lips for which there is no key. A million miles I would wander in search of love But alas this poor fool does sit pondering whether or not to open heart's door. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is an awesome poem. i really liked it. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
The timeliness of this is almost eerie for me.. Great write. Susan |
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Darksoul Member
since 2003-01-31
Posts 61 |
thank you |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
I just can't let this one get lost |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
open the door, let it in what have u got to lose? except your sanity? |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Interesting! Brad/Dark Soul.... one in the same? ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Busted!!! LOL |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Are you Brad? Just wondering...I think I'll go check. It was an interesting poem.....Just didn't know if we're supposed to resopond to ourselves or not. Oh, well.. |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Dark is my wicked evil twin... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sounds like me too...but I gave up the journey a long time ago...still sitting down |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Dan, I know just how you feel, I really do want to be loved so much and walk upon the path never before walked down, yet I feel sometimes love may just no be for me and I should just keep the vault locked forever! (sad sigh) Here's hoping you find all you're looking for, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Dan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-26-2003 01:06 PM).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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cinnamongirl Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 217 |
How lovely... love, the fear of love... just saying those three words; they hold so much power and at the same time, true surrender... don't they? Surrender... after all, all there is in this life is love. It is worth the sweet fall... Love, Moca |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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