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CSKpoet
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since 2002-07-12
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Island in Paradise

0 posted 2003-02-24 03:02 AM


in far away dreams
is the moon also sleeping
there in the tidepool?

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

© Copyright 2003 Cheryl Stewart Koomoa - All Rights Reserved
Minister Joe
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since 2003-02-22
Posts 78
TX, USA
1 posted 2003-02-24 03:19 AM


Again Cheryl--

Terrific imagery of the moon... or a reflection of it in the dream, as of course the tidepool would be affected by the moon.  You have a eye for the moment--in your work--nice to experience, and to read.

Thank you,

--Matt

Give what you have. To someone, it may be better than you dare to think.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
2 posted 2003-02-24 03:42 AM


I wonder too
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2003-02-24 04:03 AM


Very nice...James
inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
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Ohio
4 posted 2003-02-24 06:52 AM


ive thought this too, well expressed
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