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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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Return my reflection deliver what i most deserve account for redirection dismount and walk to where i ended Show patterns I live unaware of smooth over scratches where my record repeats the reocurring itch on my skull Mock my inability that lives in my underground of priority scrape knees til i see evidence red satisfied searching for complete cast into tunnels once combed. learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I really liked this one. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
scrape knees til i see evidence red powerfully descriptive piece gemma, you are on fire and deeply inspired lately. I'm loving and hanging on every word |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
You capture such a mood here...a very stirring! Eric |
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Dragon Mistress Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 289Washington, USA. |
This was indeed greatly enjoyed. I would love to read more of your work! Tanya ~*~I'm only a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~ |
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Darksoul Member
since 2003-01-31
Posts 61 |
Very nicely scribed! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
damn good!  |
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