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inluvwith66
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0 posted 2003-02-23 05:54 PM


What to do?

I need this to be over
But still I can't let go
I keep my feelings bottled up inside me
So he'll never have to know


I don't want to hurt him
The way that he hurt me
And then again I don't
Know what person I should be


Should I be the one
that let's him use me?
Or the one that makes
him see.


I try to hide it everyday
I try not to express I
Love him in anyway


But deep down I know in my heart
I know I just can't take us being apart


So why is it that love
Keeps me so confused
And when it doesn’t
I feel i'm being used


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1 posted 2003-02-23 06:02 PM




(big hugggssssssss) My heart goes out to you, sweet friend, this is a very sincere and touching debut, all I can say to you is follow your heart, know what it wants, and you will find the answer, God Bless You! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much, you have my vote, ooohhhhh...and be sure to check your E-mail for a very special greeting from all of us here at Passions! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

the_loner_23
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2 posted 2003-02-23 06:32 PM


This is so sad. But well written. I loved it.

Cold hands means a warm heart

inkedgoddess
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3 posted 2003-02-23 10:49 PM


love doesnt make sense, most times, thats why
Darksoul
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4 posted 2003-02-24 01:37 AM


Very good piece. welcome to piptalk!
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Gaia
5 posted 2003-02-24 02:28 AM


Be patient with love, for it often takes more time and dedication to blossom than we expect.
Well written angst. Welcome to Passions!

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6 posted 2003-02-24 03:44 AM


wow! I know how that feels! Welcome to Passions! good to have you!
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with you
7 posted 2003-02-24 10:21 AM


"angst" yes, that is what I was thinking here too...welcome
Susan Caldwell
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8 posted 2003-02-24 10:42 AM


Wonderful first post.  

Susan

Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2003-02-24 10:45 AM


inluvwith66
Good first write, enjoyed. All in good time.

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10 posted 2003-02-25 02:14 AM


Tell you what when you figure those questions out will you let us all know the answers , love is a mystery that is for sure.

          
~* Carpe' Diem *~  

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11 posted 2003-02-25 02:17 AM


Even though this is sad, it's
very well written...

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~  
                  

WhiteRose
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12 posted 2003-03-20 11:09 PM


I need this to be over
But still I can't let go
I keep my feelings bottled up inside me
So he'll never have to know

I know this feeling well.

Earth Angel
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13 posted 2003-03-21 10:05 AM


---one of the many riddles of love...

Welcome to Passions! Glad to make your acquaintance! I am Earth Angel and I will be looking out for more of your posts!  

Warm, welcoming hugs,
Earth Angel

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14 posted 2003-03-21 10:48 AM


Very well done and much enjoyed.
~Hugs~

~ I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before ~

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