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Landings
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since 2003-02-11
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0 posted 2003-02-23 05:21 PM



This pendulum's monotonous swing
As seconds wither and topple to the earth
Counts and measures each line who passes by
Though none could ransom my heart held captive
Ensnared by recollection of a shallow meeting

Waves clap against this ship, whose precious cargo
Is greeted only by turn of head and neglect
Yet of its necessity I am aware
But I shan't allow its import
I instead should harbor those unloaded
And docked for many day's time
As not to wish the unlike a warm welcome
But to shun the very waves on which it sailed

And in these sylvan shades of a thought wrongly cherished
I flee the light knowingly shed, and rightly so
The sun's luminous gaze, one I fear to reflect
As with my gilded noose I am contentedly hung
In this gulf I peacefully tread
To sink, perhaps to drown
And wish to someday wash ashore

© Copyright 2003 Landings - All Rights Reserved
Thomas119gold
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since 2002-06-03
Posts 708
Biloxi, MS (city by the sea)
1 posted 2003-02-23 05:25 PM


Very profound
thomas

the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
2 posted 2003-02-23 06:29 PM


Awesome write

Cold hands means a warm heart

regards2you
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since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940
California
3 posted 2003-02-24 09:53 AM




Whoa!  ~Welcome to Passions~

No idea why this has so few replies.
Perhaps, like me, others had a busy week-end...no time to read.

I really enjoyed this a great deal!!!


Hugs,  Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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