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CSKpoet
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Island in Paradise

0 posted 2003-02-24 02:51 AM



through the fingerprints
on my frigid windowpane
a cloudless blue sky
an inviting sight to see
I'll finish cleaning later

~Tanka~

[This message has been edited by CSKpoet (02-24-2003 03:08 AM).]

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Minister Joe
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since 2003-02-22
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1 posted 2003-02-24 03:16 AM


Cheryl,

This is a great moment here in your piece--standing at the window, pausing in the midst of a task--and giving in to that urge to just go outside, and enjoy life.

I would so love to give into that here--if it weren't so cold~

Thank you for sharing this,

--Matt

Give what you have. To someone, it may be better than you dare to think.

passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2003-02-24 03:43 AM


amen to that!
Darksoul
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since 2003-01-31
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3 posted 2003-02-24 03:43 PM


very nicely done
regards2you
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since 2002-10-01
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4 posted 2003-02-24 06:59 PM




Hi Cheryl

Liked the idea here. Enjoyed.

Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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