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MissKlarmic
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since 2003-02-20
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Canada,N.S

0 posted 2003-02-23 02:11 PM



He was a naked soul that seemed forever wronged

Shatteringly sad that i couldn't see in his eyes

An emotionally loaded , hostile observer who would take in every tiny element

His soul looked radiant with a ravishingly lovely hum about it

Troubles, tears a world away hopes and fears always being saved for another day

Hi stays on my ming my thoughts and my dreams

My foggy view clouded by this scrawled cover up

Quiet he is as a comparator on his own

Quiet he seems to live diverged by all

Not a hatemonger , nor living by hegemony

hesitantly i`d say irrational , knowing the past is irrecoverable.

Yet the way i feel is irrecusable,irremissible and irremovable.

Love as defined is

" A great feeling of fondness and friendship,affection or devotion,selfless care and concern."

Love as defined is what i feel for him

By now it is more.

I`m a lovelorn fool

Sticking to measureless fondness for him.and him alone.

possibly these words are meaningless to him

Yet to me modal to my heart.

There is no obligation to a response I wish his mind to be a perspicacious one

For if so much is unknown in my head how could my heart persuade my mind of what it truly feels.of wanting to be with him and actually being with him.

Though it seems and it is as it seems nothing else seems as perused in my mind than the thought of it.

I have sent a million words to you none meaning as much as these.

© Copyright 2003 Lesley Anne Crowe - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2003-02-23 02:41 PM


Enjoyed...James
the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA
2 posted 2003-02-23 06:41 PM


Enjoyed the read

Cold hands means a warm heart

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