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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2003-02-23 02:02 PM


My Island Sweet

Upon beach chairs
beneath swaying palm trees
two lovers enjoy a
fresh ocean breeze.

A ginger lei
washes to shore
to kiss the feet
of her that I adore.

As lei and waves
gently kiss her feet
I kiss the lips
of my island sweet.

JamesLee
February23
2003



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ecrivan
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1 posted 2003-02-23 02:11 PM


wow what a needed retreat..thanks James


Earth Angel
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2 posted 2003-02-23 02:13 PM


I'm heading for the islands. Are all the men like you in that tropical paradise?!?

Warm hugs,
EA

Charisma
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3 posted 2003-02-23 02:14 PM


yessssss, love this treat very much

Charisma

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4 posted 2003-02-23 10:24 PM


a very pretty scene.

-majnu
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the_loner_23
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5 posted 2003-02-23 10:25 PM


Beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

garysgirl
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6 posted 2003-02-23 10:29 PM


James, this is so beautiful. One of your best that I've read, I believe...

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel GG~  
                  

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7 posted 2003-02-24 04:14 AM


mmmm, very warm!
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8 posted 2003-02-24 11:46 PM




(smiles) Oh James, this is lovely, sweet friend, this made me sigh imagining the island paradise! (big hugggsssssss) Soooooo romantic, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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