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Midnitesun

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Gaia

0 posted 2003-02-23 01:42 PM

I have felt the breeze of you
that brought me to
the knees of who
made me feel the real
of life’s feel
within the touch of love
in warmest gentlest glove,
enfolding me
inside humanity.
Thank you.

aries_luv_ppl
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since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

1 posted 2003-02-23 01:54 PM

hey nice that you rhyme real and feel. I like the poem.

~Every girl has a dream within.

Midnitesun

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Gaia

2 posted 2003-02-23 01:58 PM

Thank you for your reply, Eliza!

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

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3 posted 2003-02-23 03:58 PM

Your words always reach and touch in the deepest reaches of my heart.
Thank you,
Eric

Midnitesun

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Gaia

4 posted 2003-02-23 04:01 PM

How kind of you to say that, Eric! Thank you so much for spending a moment here.

D.Lester Young
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since 2001-12-08

Posts 1219
Austin, Tx

5 posted 2003-02-23 04:02 PM

In winds so special your words did magic.

Midnitesun

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Gaia

6 posted 2003-02-23 04:05 PM

Thanks DL! Glad you enjoyed this fresh breeze.

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light

7 posted 2003-02-23 04:16 PM

Your whispers caress as gently as a summer breeze...
Enjoyed as usual!

Have a wonderful day!

Warm hugs,
Linda

Midnitesun

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Gaia

8 posted 2003-02-23 04:22 PM

Linda, thank you for that reply!

Have a great week!

SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown

9 posted 2003-02-23 04:26 PM

This is beautiful.

Mistletoe Angel

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Portland, Oregon

10 posted 2003-02-23 04:27 PM

(smiles) Oh Kacy, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, this made me smile as this is just simply lovely, may love always be the wind beneath your wings, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kacy, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Midnitesun

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Gaia

11 posted 2003-02-23 04:28 PM

Hello Sue! Thank you for taking time to read and reply to this.
Cool breezes to you.

Almost missed you, Noah! Thanks, dear friend.

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (02-23-2003 04:29 PM).]

Shadowed_Innersense
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since 2001-12-05

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somewhere at the edge

12 posted 2003-02-24 08:29 AM

Touching ....

... leaves me in quite a stir.

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

13 posted 2003-02-24 09:05 AM

Midnitesun
Lovely thoughts, enjoyed.

VAS
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since 2000-11-16

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Oregon

14 posted 2003-02-24 09:26 AM

Very, very sweet.

I found myself thinking that "its" instead of "in" before "warmest, gentlest glove" would be a more accurate fit, what do you think? This such a beautifully romantic piece. Hope you don't mind my candor.

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

passing shadows
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displaced

15 posted 2003-02-25 03:09 AM

wranx
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Moved from a shack to a barn

16 posted 2003-02-25 08:51 AM

Beauty, in the fragile of eggshell.

Ed

secretlife
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Grean Earth ,,,

17 posted 2003-02-25 09:00 AM

Midnitesun.....

I really love your poem too...
It enters the heart and keep him
beating so fast from these great meanings of love...

Thanx alot for that poem...
Hugsssss

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