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The Breath Of Fantasies
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The Breath Of Fantasies |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Aflutter deep magenta fog, consumes of every thought A given drink of crystal dew by pinkest petal caught And tickled to be softest placed in dance upon the tongue In trace to breeze the throat in glee and swallowed as it’s sung Each whim a wave unbound by threads or blushed to pool about In share of everywhere and all that inner space seeks out And drizzled by the summer rain upon your skin in beads To taste the flavors of a love that cares of all it needs For I would seek the meadow to explore at dawn’s first light And I would take you to the shores of whim and fond delight To be among creations as intended there to be As simple-minded now unblinded heart of fantasy Mingling under wildflower scents in wonder down the spine And whispered of the visions nibbled in each panted pine As stars submit to host the entrance of a solar blur Into your arms as priceless charms these fantasies I purr Copyright Kkh 2/22/03 |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
K. PUUURRRRRFECTION..... Very nicely done in your impeccable way!! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
This is most assuredly, one of my favorites from your pen---and believe me, that is saying a great deal! Simply superb!!! ~ May roses scent your day, and jasmine scent your nights... Warm hugs, EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ThisDiamond A delight to read. You got my vote. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwww, just reading this had me picture Shangri-La, I LOVE IT!!! (kiss on cheek) May the butterflies always swarm around you and the lilacs blossom in your heart with loves afterglow, hooray, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
lovely piece you wrote here.....enjoyed it! Charisma |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful. Eric |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
What a beautiful image your words paint here. Your words are always special. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
'For I would seek the meadow to explore at dawn’s first light And I would take you to the shores of whim and fond delight To be among creations as intended there to be As simple-minded now unblinded heart of fantasy' Do you know how perfectly this flows? Great poem! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh so breathtakingly beautiful Kathleen. One for the book for sure. ~Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Oh Kathleen, this is so beautiful. Most certainly for the book....  Hugs, Ethel [This message has been edited by garysgirl (02-23-2003 10:56 PM).] |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
ThisDiamond - very soft, very purring, very good, very voteable... BC |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
They have covered all that could be said of this beautiful poem so I will just get into the voting booth  |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Kathleen~ This is truly beautiful and a wonderful choice for book submission.  Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
great write, it's got my vote for sure! |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Beautiful poem! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
exquiste images and palette of colors, love your signature style |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Enjoy a great deal. I especially like the first stanza. Of course, this should be in the book....but, then I believe all your poetry should be in ~a book~... Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Wow, no words can suffiently decribe the pure beauty of this write. Susan |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
This is truly BEAUTIFUL!!! Bridgette |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
This is extremely beautiful! You definitly have my vote. I LOVED the flow of this!!! I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Very smoooooooooooth and so pretty. Yes, I like. *s When you think you have heard it all, |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
. I loved it!Anyone can write, But only poets can capture the heart. |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
Uhmm...not much else can be said that hasn't already been... voting now. nice read chris Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
TD.......You are always good, in everyway amazing in the beauty and form of poetry...this is so lovely. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A jewel...in reflections! |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Kathleen, this is so beautiful. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I hope I can write 1/2 this good when I grow up this is stunning writing. |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This one is wonderful!! Voting.... |
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