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Darksoul
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since 2003-01-31
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0 posted 2003-02-24 01:39 AM



Breathe on my neck
sending shivers
down my spine
caress my heart with
your full lips
and tell me how much
you need me
share with me this happy moment
until the sun rises
and steals night away
and you from my arms.

© Copyright 2003 Dan Mauro - All Rights Reserved
Minister Joe
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since 2003-02-22
Posts 78
TX, USA
1 posted 2003-02-24 03:21 AM


Dan,

A gem of a quiet moment captured here.

Thank you for sharing this,

--Matt

Give what you have. To someone, it may be better than you dare to think.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
2 posted 2003-02-24 03:42 AM


beautiful!
Shadowed_Innersense
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since 2001-12-05
Posts 49
somewhere at the edge
3 posted 2003-02-24 08:25 AM


The rapture of gentle breath,
   and so taken, thy love's theft.

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
4 posted 2003-02-24 08:31 AM


Very nice and good morning!

Susan

Darksoul
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since 2003-01-31
Posts 61

5 posted 2003-02-24 09:48 AM


thank you!
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