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"Those Days" |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought 
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Been one of those days Awhile too long. Been all dull and gray And I can’t sing my song. I’m dancin’ off beat And I keep falling down; Trippin’ over my feet With a mask like a clown. Swallowed by sorrow, Alive in His grace. Are there ever tomorrows? I’m stuck in this place. A clown’s happy smile Kept hidden and still. Hands tight in the trial Show joy and good will. Still dancing, and trying, Fighting real hard. But these days are like dying I’m bleeding and scarred. - And so it was that time stood still - (blink, breathe, stand, fight) [This message has been edited by GG (02-23-2003 06:01 AM).] |
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abbe Member
since 2003-01-20
Posts 131michigan, usa |
keep dancing! the scars only add purity to the motion... good job! |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
You have captured a place we have all been.And you have done so with beautiful words. Next time I am in this place...I will have your words to guide me....knowing I am never alone. Thanks. Eric |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Alyssa, Liked the rhyming, and yes, we are always in His grace., no matter the stress and strife. A good message. Enjoyed, Hugs, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Alyssa, great expression! Fabulous poem! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Oh Alyssa, this is so very heartaching, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you but know His grace is ever omnipresent and He will heed your calls of mercy with love! (sad sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Alyssa, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Abbe, I think I will keep dancing, and fighting, thanks glad you replied.Eric, I'm not so sure my words are the ones needed to guide you, but I think your right we're all there at times. Thanks for replying Pat, yea its just a matter of recognising ourselves being in His Grace.. 'cause we always are.glad you liked it and the rhyming thanks. Hugs.Denise, great and fabulous? wow! thank you very much. Noah, yes, He always replies with love.. though He tends to do it by allowing some hard things so I realise how easy the last one was  But things always work for the good. Thanks for the reply!Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - (blink, breathe, stand, fight) [This message has been edited by GG (02-24-2003 12:30 AM).] |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Alyssa, know the feeling to well lucky Speaking of ghosts, and after such an eternity. . .wouldn't you know, here comes mine again... |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
 You can't see me but this is a standing Ovation! |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Lucky, I'm sad to see that you know the feeling, but yet glad someone could relate. Thanks for the reply Albert, thank you! I'm honored Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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cinnamongirl Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 217 |
Wow... I do also know this place; I have been there far too many times... but had I not, your words would have helped me to feel such powerful emotions- and learn from you and your wisdom of feeling. It is important to touch upon depth such as this... and you do so beautifully. Love, Moca |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Moca, wow another great reply! I'm sad to see you know this place so well, but I'm honored to think you'd find wisdom in my words. Thank you vandana, thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed this blessings to you.Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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