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Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

0 posted 2003-02-22 10:04 PM

Faith,
a pristine lake
serene waters
reflect the heavens

Truth,
a stone cast
scattered image
in rings betrayed

Wisdom,
a trowel which
fashions stone
into new walls

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-02-22 10:05 PM

Awesome write. I Love this

Cold hands means a warm heart

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

2 posted 2003-02-22 10:14 PM

lots wisdom and truth between the lines here...nicely done

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

3 posted 2003-02-23 02:45 AM

and this went over even better than the last

Thanks loner very nice of you to read

thanks yu ecrivan, man our habitants suck don't they?

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

4 posted 2003-02-23 10:21 AM

reads like I Ching...just enough imagery to apply to all, methinks. Almost spartan, but with depth.

(and I will be around...sigh. I've been feeding drunken masked people over here...)

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2003-02-23 11:28 AM

Short and to the point, but not simple.
Bad habits can be changed. At least I hope so.

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

6 posted 2003-02-23 02:05 PM

thanks K

kacy hope so too

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

7 posted 2003-02-24 03:07 PM

walls built
breached
but brilliance
bestows
ripples
to the pond
of thought
hell... I don't know... popped into my head when I read yours....

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

8 posted 2003-02-24 08:20 PM

Thanks and good work cpat if i can inspire anything I've done something right

[This message has been edited by Aenimal (02-24-2003 08:21 PM).]

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

9 posted 2003-04-05 04:24 AM

Raph - had to bring this back up - loved it the first time I read it - but it still needs to breathe . . .

Faith,
a pristine lake
serene waters
reflect the heavens

nuff said . . . xxoo

dreambuilder
Member

since 2003-03-23

Posts 319
caddyshack

10 posted 2003-04-05 11:46 AM

awesome write - really spoke to me
my faith was shattered when I found the truth (not taught by a church) & now I/m rebuilding with the tools in my own hands.
my own inner temple - formed by my wisdom & understanding / not something written by men to manipulate the masses

. . . all that we see is but a dream within a dream . . .

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

11 posted 2003-04-05 01:11 PM

you just opened my eyes

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

12 posted 2003-04-05 03:49 PM

Faith, Truth, Wisdom, you touch upon immensity in just one breath ....enough to ponder over forever!
Raffaele mi sorprendi sempre.
Love, Margherita

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

13 posted 2003-04-05 03:56 PM

Thanks Sue, unfortunately it doesn't say it all, it's the second and third verses that do

Dreambuilder excellent work, long and hard road isn't it? But in the end worth every moment and fear.

Dixie glad to be of service and hope you find your peace

Grazie Margherita, always an honour when you read and reply the way you do.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

14 posted 2003-04-05 04:41 PM

I know I meant the first one for you . . . to rebuild . . .

[This message has been edited by littlewing (04-05-2003 04:43 PM).]

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