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"Lost and Found"
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"Lost and Found" |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Beneath the gaze of azure skies pondered o'er impassiond breeze, of a moment, spent in forming, links of possiblities. Might there come an understanding to this nature, if immersed, in this sensory surrounding common to all things on Earth? Billowed clouds to form a pillow for the back-drop of a dream. Flowing thoughts in streams cascading into pools where softly gleams proof of our impending transience, as with all our great constructs, falls the night upon this vision all things scheme to run amuck. Where with-in is proper order, might clear skies still persevere? As the wind of change is blowing notes that only poets hear. [This message has been edited by Dr.Moose1 (02-22-2003 09:13 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) I think as long as the zephyr exists, the breath of poetry will always have these thoughts streaming around us and just when we thought we lost something you know it is in the updraft somewhere and will come back down! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is precious, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet William, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Doc! Your place of bewilderment... is probably meant for me! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Doc--the beauty of the imagery and construction of this poem, almost kept me from the heaviness of the thought behind it. Pondering is a poet's job, I think.  |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Noah, regrets for not replying sooner. I've always liked the word "zephyr", it's soothing to the soul. Doc Sunshine, You, my dear, are welcome anytime! Turn right at your keyboard, follow your instincts and before you know it , we'll be sharing a cuppa. Doc Martie, Thanks for replying. Same story, different day. I realize we're all much busier than anyone should be expected to be, however,to take this long in answering is simply un-excusable, on my part. I'm glad you stopped by, for you to comment on imagery, I'll take as a true compliment. Doc |
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