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Albert J. Allie
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0 posted 2003-02-22 07:53 PM


Sitting on the ledge,
Staring out at the view.
Eyes close...Reflect...Smile.
You're there as always,
Missing you so bad,
Can hardly live.
Cool air blowing on face,
Won't be long,
Your arms,
My body,
Smiling.
Missing you so bad,
But remembering when
We last touched.
So sweet,
We cried,
Then smiled.
Missing you so bad,
I'm going crazy,
It's so hard,
It's been the longest wait,
Such a long half hour.

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1 posted 2003-02-22 07:58 PM




(smiles) Oh Albert, this is sooooooo cute, sweet friend, I think I would already miss my love the minute she went out the door to go to work! (sigh) This is precious, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Albert, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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Member Patricius
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2 posted 2003-02-22 08:04 PM


This is very sweet Albert. Enjoyed. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

Albert J. Allie
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3 posted 2003-02-22 08:07 PM


Thank you Chris and Noah!!!!!!
ecrivan
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4 posted 2003-02-22 08:17 PM


and when passion strikes the clock's hour strikes even harder...nice write Albert


Albert J. Allie
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5 posted 2003-02-22 08:31 PM


Merci ecrivan!! I am glad you enjoyed!
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6 posted 2003-02-22 08:56 PM


Cute ending!

Warm hugs,
Earth Angel

Albert J. Allie
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7 posted 2003-02-22 08:59 PM


Thank you Earth Angel! Glad you enjoyed!
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8 posted 2003-02-22 10:43 PM


tick,tock,tick,tock,
water drippping thru the faucet, drop by drop,
dali said it best

ThisDiamond
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9 posted 2003-02-22 11:05 PM


Grin...
TD

Albert J. Allie
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10 posted 2003-02-22 11:49 PM


Thank you Goddess and Diamond!!!
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11 posted 2003-02-23 04:57 AM


neat write! enjoyed!
Albert J. Allie
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12 posted 2003-02-24 07:24 PM


Thank you passing shadows~~~~~~~

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