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gemjop
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0 posted 2003-02-22 04:49 PM



In between in between
is there such a place?

moving at pace
wandering through gardens of the sky
never fading with daylight
nor drowning in dark

misty with mystery
collecting rain tears
casting a shadow of shelter yet fear
blanketing our expectations

sea of cloud existing in sky
melting down as our sun takes the prize
weathering our delusional breakdowns
measuring miles in unmeasurable life.

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

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Kethry
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1 posted 2003-02-22 04:57 PM


I think there is definitely an in between of in between and you have painted the cracks of time to perfection.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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2 posted 2003-02-22 05:19 PM




(smiles) I think there exists sucha  place, after all aren't we in-between between another universe? (big hugggssssss) This is lovely, sweet friend, your words are always delightful to read, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Gemma, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

the_loner_23
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3 posted 2003-02-22 05:34 PM


Very beautiful words written here

Cold hands means a warm heart

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2003-02-22 06:12 PM


gemjop
A good write and a good read.

Albert J. Allie
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5 posted 2003-02-22 06:54 PM


Very beautiful. I enjoyed the read!!!
Ericc
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6 posted 2003-02-22 07:49 PM


This is great!
Eric

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just out of reach
7 posted 2003-02-22 08:02 PM


Very much enjoyed. Great thoughts. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

ecrivan
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since 2001-12-10
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my own state
8 posted 2003-02-22 08:25 PM


enjoyed the search for the in between and take that to be an interlude on the screen
of life


passing shadows
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displaced
9 posted 2003-02-22 09:34 PM


wonderful write! I really liked this one!
Shadowed_Innersense
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somewhere at the edge
10 posted 2003-02-24 08:34 AM


What was once lost ...
   has again been found.


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