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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-02-22 04:01 PM


Disturb Me

there is
a velvet storm
in you
it stirs me
I watch
in wonder
stimulating hair
to stand
on end
my air aroused
as I loose
my breath
in awe
tempting me
to want
to be disturbed

"Don't let the mistakes of your past be the journey of your future."


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1 posted 2003-02-22 04:35 PM




(smiles) Oh Helen, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, may the velvet storm always cradle your heart with loving care and cotton candy lightning kisses swim in you! (kiss on cheek) This is beautiful and sensual, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

gemjop
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2 posted 2003-02-22 04:56 PM


helen, lady, where are all these silky smooth thoughts coming from? i like em, send some to me!!!
    youre sounding happy...and i like it.

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

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3 posted 2003-02-22 05:36 PM


Beautiful as usual Helen

Cold hands means a warm heart

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4 posted 2003-02-22 05:37 PM


Oooh, I like this one Helen!! Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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