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fearing trust |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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Punctured breathing escapes from depth...... i thought i'd covered. Healing is process deceased i love you....... still i'm waveringly posessed by only me Questioning my silence objects rise and fall in my lungs catching something you don't recognise Fallen into this for lifetimes supply interrupted by fear.... clinging to hairs that stand on end when you touch me I pace backwards unobtainable inhaling weakening products of you.... burst all honeymoon delight Genuine alarm defeats my softness disregarding yours for me..... in this confusion i'm finding you Soft motions alluringly beckon eyes i live for i'm so sorry i engage you in my minds tricks. learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
It is easy to be wary and perfectly understandable. Once hurt, it is hard to trust again. ~True~ love always wins out, no matter the trials and tribulations. It is okay to go slow. Liked this a lot, Hugs, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Minister Joe Member
since 2003-02-22
Posts 78TX, USA |
gemjop, I especially liked this strophe, Fallen into this for lifetimes supply interrupted by fear.... clinging to hairs that stand on end when you touch me That idea of goosebumps, set off very nicely in this piece. Your construction of falling--almost cascading strophes was visually interesting to follow as well. Almost like a wishful caress--though the poem speaks of love's rougher moments. Enjoyed it, --Matt |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) I think the problem is I am too trustworthy and sadly so many don't keep their promises and it can be so frustrating! (sad sigh) This is heartfelt, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Gemma, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
gemma..... |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
yep, love hurts, then you die,end of story......... |
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