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cinnamongirl
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0 posted 2003-02-22 11:20 AM


Your name is
A whispered prayer,
A sweet song that plays
Within my heart...
A divine dance within
Each breath I take...
And you, yourself-
With
Or without
Your name...
You are the answer,
The gentle harmony singing
Eternally within my soul,
The ecstatic movement
Of the sweetest joy.
I speak your name
In breathy tones,
So sensual to feel
The sounds of you
Caressed by my lips,
Savoring slowly
The taste of your name...
Recalling the beauty
Of your skin,
Your blue sky eyes
Calling love to me...
I desire so much to
Speak your name,
As I do in fervent prayer
Every moment of my life...
And find you are there,
Reaching out your hand
To reawaken me with your touch...
…your kiss...
…your smile.

Your name is to me
A whispered prayer... and you,

You are the answer.


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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2003-02-22 11:30 AM


cinnamongirl
Well done, I love cinnamon.

the_loner_23
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA
2 posted 2003-02-22 11:57 AM


How romantic. I love this.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Ericc
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3 posted 2003-02-22 12:24 PM


Beautiful.
Love,
Eric

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2003-02-22 04:22 PM


Enjoyed...James
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5 posted 2003-02-22 04:30 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, this made me smile as all your gorgeous sentiments of love and heart make me sigh! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is precious, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
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6 posted 2003-02-22 05:41 PM


soft and romantic, everything a whispered prayer should be. Write on
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Margherita
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Eternity
7 posted 2003-02-22 07:26 PM


Beautiful language of your heart.
Love, Margherita

Albert J. Allie
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Queens NY
8 posted 2003-02-22 07:33 PM


I tip my hat to you! This was beautiful cinnamon!!


carol
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Florida USA
9 posted 2003-02-22 09:15 PM


Cinnamon, Very nice

always treat others the way you want to be treated
Love from Rita

regards2you
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10 posted 2003-02-24 09:47 AM



Heart touching. Enjoyed.


Hugs, Pat


..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27
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11 posted 2003-02-24 09:49 AM


This was so romantically beautiful!

Susan

CMGrimm
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12 posted 2003-02-24 08:55 PM


very very well done cinnamon...i especially love this one.  going into search library looking for more of you.

chris

Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions.  - ANON.



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