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Elizabeth Santos
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0 posted 2003-02-22 09:08 AM



Breath of Purity

(For Denise, Ruth and Nancy)

We’ve come together here to be
In company of our peers
Among sweet friends of poetry
We treasure through the years

We met afar through word and phrase
And came to know each heart
In silent verses that amazed
The ones so far apart

And time was binding words to words
And souls were intertwined
Through voices that remained unheard
Between the sculptured line

But each one came to recognize
The vestments that were worn
And those who through our distant eyes
In likeness were adorned

From common seed and common earth
We reached our branches wide
And felt the power of common worth
That harbored deep inside

A leaf would shade the drying bark
A limb would hold a limb
A heart would hold another heart
In shelter of the wind

The purity of friendship’s breath
Uplifted me today
Please know you’ve soothed my inner depths
When you have gone away

Thank you for coming to my home

Elizabeth Santos
2/25/03

© Copyright 2003 Elizabeth Santos - All Rights Reserved
Ericc
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1 posted 2003-02-22 10:17 AM


Such a beautiful gesture.
Eric

Martie
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2 posted 2003-02-22 10:24 AM


Liz--How lucky you are to be so blessed, how blessed are they to be so lucky!  
Sunshine
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3 posted 2003-02-22 10:24 AM



Each line, a treasure,
but this...

And time was binding words to words
And souls were intertwined
Through voices that remained unheard
Between the sculptured line


A :keeper

Sudhir Iyer
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4 posted 2003-02-22 02:46 PM


WOW... such beautiful poetry...

regards,
sudhir

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5 posted 2003-02-22 02:51 PM




(smiles) Oh Elizabeth, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, I love it! (kiss on cheek) I'm so happy that you all got to see each other, yay, and may the song of friendship always sing in each others hearts just as you are a friend to every one of us, yay! God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Elizabeth, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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6 posted 2003-02-22 03:41 PM


LovelyLizzy~
Your poetry is merely a font of 'word-thoughts' from an overflowing heart~
You're  B E A U T I F U L  !
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com                        

Denise
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7 posted 2003-02-23 04:47 PM


Thank you for your hospitality and friendship, Elizabeth. You are a gracious host. The weekend with you, Nan and Ruth just went way too fast.

As soon as I got home I made the Swedish Apple Pie for Rick. Half the pie is gone already (I helped!). Thanks for that great fuss-free recipe!

Beautiful poem. I will put my copy with the others that I have from you.

Thank you again for a lovely weekend!  

Enchantress
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8 posted 2003-02-23 07:00 PM


Perfectly beautiful Elizabeth.
Much enhjoyed.
~Hugs~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

regards2you
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9 posted 2003-02-23 08:29 PM




Just beautiful Elizabeth. Friendship such a precious gift.  Thank you for sharing your thoughts is such wonderful poetic form.


Enjoyed,  Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

Connel
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10 posted 2003-02-23 08:32 PM


hehe.. Very cool.. I do Like the way it is here.. We all met eachother from one point, and how oyou can meet someone, from such a distance. I really enjoyed this poem.

Anyone can write, But only poets can capture the heart.

Elizabeth Santos
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11 posted 2003-02-23 09:56 PM


Thank you poet friends. It was a wonderfully warm gathering this weekend and could have included many other poets as well. I would like to thank Nan, Denise and our precious Hoot Owl for coming to visit. I'll never forget our candlelight dinner. our ride on "mirror-like asphalt", the gigantic silk flower and candle warehouse, where everyone disappeared into the rows of merchandise, Ruth,s scrabble abilities, talking to Pepper, Mysteria, lovely Lyra, Ellie and all the rain on top of snow, but the sunshine in our hearts, the fantastic meal we cooked together, the memories we made, the recognition of how far our friendships have come through the blue pages into the real world.
Thank you all for commenting on this poem which I wrote for my 3 visitors.
POetic wishes and hugs
Liz

hoot_owl_rn
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12 posted 2003-02-24 06:05 PM


Liz...thank you for this poem and for your hospitality. I had a wonderful time at your house. You are such a gem my dear friend.
BTW...I forgot to get the pie recipe, could you e-mail me it?

Seymour Tabin
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13 posted 2003-02-24 06:09 PM


Elizabeth,
Beautiful write.

Lisann
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14 posted 2003-02-24 11:37 PM


wow....this is beautiful,  great job.
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15 posted 2003-02-25 04:19 AM


thank you for sharing
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16 posted 2003-02-25 04:58 AM


Darn I miss all the fun, but I am sure glad you had a good time.  I could smell the apple pie from here.

          
~* Carpe' Diem *~  

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