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Margherita
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0 posted 2003-02-22 06:23 AM



The touch

Powerfully drawn to you,
at high speed I fly,
guided by my desire.

Your image haunting me,
from behind the clouds,
flashes of Light.

On wings of butterfly
softly I touch ground
in heavenly realms.

My eyes find your eyes
And extensively I linger
exploring your magic.

The promise of joy
wavers and flashes to and fro,
I surrender and fall into you.

In the touch our hearts merge
pulsing as one in a sea of Love
and we expand in Beauty.

In total enchantment we dance,
stretching this moment of grace
into the depth of forever.


Love, Margherita

© Copyright 2003 Margherita Rueger - All Rights Reserved
Rick
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1 posted 2003-02-22 07:31 AM


Margherita, these are beautiful words here, I very much enjoyed, thank you.

Sincerely
Rick

Sandpiper
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2 posted 2003-02-22 09:52 AM


"into the depth of forever"

..and may it be so--enjoyed!!

"And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul."
Pablo Neruda

SmartChick
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3 posted 2003-02-22 10:04 AM


This is just beautiful.
Albert J. Allie
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4 posted 2003-02-22 11:54 AM


This is simply beautiful margherita!!!

On wings of butterfly
softly I touch ground
in heavenly realms.



Ericc
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5 posted 2003-02-22 12:25 PM


Simply beautiful Margherita.
Love,
Eric

the_loner_23
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6 posted 2003-02-22 12:26 PM


This is so beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

Mistletoe Angel
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7 posted 2003-02-22 02:19 PM




(smiles) Oh Margherita, this is so beautiful, sweet friend, I love it, and may forever always bring you eternal happiness, yay! (kiss on cheek) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Margherita, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

JamesMichael
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8 posted 2003-02-22 04:24 PM


Quite a sensual touch...James
Margherita
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9 posted 2003-02-22 06:46 PM


Thank you Rick, Sandpiper, Smartchick, Albert, Eric, the loner, Noah and James for your kind comments.
Love to all.
Margherita ... always drawn to untold heights!

BloomingRose
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10 posted 2003-03-08 08:49 AM


Very beautiful...

Deb

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11 posted 2003-03-08 06:55 PM


enjoyed
littlewing
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12 posted 2003-03-08 11:02 PM


Margherita - this is just astounding:

On wings of butterfly
softly I touch ground
in heavenly realms.

beautiful xxoo

passing shadows
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13 posted 2003-03-09 02:01 AM


wow! I love such beautiful writing as this
Aenimal
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14 posted 2003-03-09 02:31 AM


Beautiful piece of writing
vlraynes
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15 posted 2003-03-09 02:35 AM



Margherita~
This is a beautifully penned piece.
I enjoyed the read.
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

rkcraig
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16 posted 2003-03-09 02:46 AM


nicely done, a beautiful poem
Margherita
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17 posted 2003-03-09 05:54 AM


Dear friends, Deb, vandana, littlewing, passing shadows, Raffaele, Vicky and rckraig, thank you for your appreciating and loving words.
Love to all.
Margherita
Wishing you all a beautiful Sunday ... full of love.

Sunshine
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18 posted 2003-03-27 02:42 PM



You yourself have a light
and delicate touch,
Margherita...

it's a delight to read your poems!

        Karilea - If I whisper, will you listen?...

Thomas119gold
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19 posted 2003-03-27 02:49 PM


The promise of joy
wavers and flashes to and fro,
I surrender and fall into you.

Again you get my applause

Thomas

morefiah
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20 posted 2003-03-27 03:26 PM


Simply beautiful. Thank you.
vandana
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21 posted 2003-03-27 05:19 PM


enjoyed
JamesMichael
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22 posted 2003-03-28 04:33 AM


Nice...nice...nice...James
Margherita
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23 posted 2003-03-28 08:22 AM


Thank you for touch-ing me!
Love, Margherita

NewEnglandlazurlu
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24 posted 2003-03-28 10:25 AM


I just love this. It's so calm and delicate and lovely.

...In the touch our hearts merge
pulsing as one in a sea of Love
and we expand in Beauty...


Just beautiful.

Hugs for peace Margherita.  Marti

Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts.  A.Einstein

Seymour Tabin
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25 posted 2003-03-28 10:47 AM


Margherita
A lovely write, enjoyed the read.

garysgirl
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26 posted 2003-03-28 10:48 AM


Sorry I missed this, Margherita. This
is absolutely beautiful. I love it.  

Heart Hugs,
Ethel

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