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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2003-02-22 05:24 AM


If Love

I'll let some water
pass under the bridge.
Time will tell my heart
if love has died or lives.

JamesLee
Februay21
2003

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Margherita
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Eternity
1 posted 2003-02-22 05:47 AM


Beautiful image and meaning.
I love this .... time WILL tell!
Love, Margherita

the_loner_23
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2 posted 2003-02-22 11:48 AM


Very Beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2003-02-22 04:59 PM




(sigh) Yes, let the water come tumbling down from beneath the bridge and let the valley of your heart grow fertile, and if the tide comes you will know if it is real! (big hugggssssss) This is heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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just out of reach
4 posted 2003-02-22 05:36 PM


Yes, James, give it time. Lovely. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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By the sea
5 posted 2003-02-22 06:51 PM


Yes, time always tells.  Nice work, James!

The stars will shine when I am gone,
the earth will turn on as before,
the gulls, still race along the shore,
the morning star, still kiss the dawn

carol
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Florida USA
6 posted 2003-02-22 09:13 PM


James,I enjoyed the read

always treat others the way you want to be treated
Love from Rita

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