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pk
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since 2003-02-11
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0 posted 2003-02-22 03:12 AM


The touch of your thigh to mine
Brings shivers prior to touch
The smell of your neck
And curve of your breast
Leaves me wanting
Waiting to caress your lips
And those ears, so soft
Whispering my love
While slowly tickling your arm
Time, eternity it seems
To slowly kiss up your spine
And begin again
If you only knew
Patiently, breathing
The line of your shoulder
Loving the outside
As well as whats within

"Imagine what you would do if you knew no one was looking"

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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2003-02-22 05:26 AM


Like this...James
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
2 posted 2003-02-22 05:51 AM


Yes, beautiful. That's love, when you appreciate the outer AND the inner beauty.
Love, Margherita

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
3 posted 2003-02-22 07:03 AM



Perhaps this should be entitled "You"...

Lovely!

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