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That Playa TL
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since 2003-02-21
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0 posted 2003-02-22 02:28 AM


"My Love"

I give to you and you give to me
we are the example of what true love should be
we've been together for 16 months and still going strong
when we're so much alike, how could we go wrong?
I give you kisses on your neck and lower body
I get high when i see you in those low cut shorts, lord have mercy
I smell Versace perfume and it reminds me of you
cuz the essence of your love is rich and unbreakable, i love you

my love, my love, my love
you are the love of my life (my love)
you make everything right (my love)
i goto sleep with you by my side each and every night (my love)
(repeat)

we'll always be together, its not even a question
you were sent to me from up above as a blessin'
when i feel down and depressed, you're right there
helping me cope with my problems, helping me solve em,
desolve em, u make them disappear
you're the only thing on my mind, thinking about the hot sex and the love that we share
nothing less do i ever expect
i look into the future and see us being family and having kids

(chorus 2x)

© Copyright 2003 William D. Curtner - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
1 posted 2003-02-22 05:54 AM


Passion with a future perspective ...
Must be real Love, as your heart says ..
Margherita

the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA
2 posted 2003-02-22 11:50 AM


This full of passion and I like that.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Fauxreal
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since 2003-02-16
Posts 38

3 posted 2003-02-22 12:36 PM



Oh (sigh) the new exciting innocence of new love. Full of such kindness, and hope. It's like a breath of fresh air for those of us in a "comfortable" relationship- like a pair of worn in old sweatpants- this poem is like a new pair of jeans that make u feel good

Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2003-02-22 02:09 PM




(smiles) This is lovely, sweet friend, I just love your beautiful songs here, I would love to hear them put to music and you can sing these to your love and she is destined to swoon! (big hugggssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
5 posted 2003-02-22 04:51 PM


There's nothing like a love song to lift the heart.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
6 posted 2003-02-22 11:44 PM


Silky...James
passing shadows
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7 posted 2003-02-23 04:58 AM


wonderful to read!
That Playa TL
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Tampa, FL
8 posted 2003-02-26 06:57 AM


Thanks alot to those who replied
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