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Rest of Our Lives
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Rest of Our Lives |
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That Playa TL Junior Member
since 2003-02-21
Posts 19Tampa, FL |
"Rest of Our Lives" listen girl, i'm gonna love u forever, no matter what you do no need to argue because we agree on every issue lets spend the rest of our lives together lets hold each other thru the cold weather we can make it thru anything cuz we are strong and in my eyes, you can do no wrong i'm waiting for the day for u tell me that you're pregnant the day that i'm gonna be a daddy, making everyday of my life pleasant laying next to you in the hospital bed, holding our new-born till death do us appart, just like we had sworn chorus together, spend the rest of our lives together, make it thru the cold weather together, work out our every problem together, hold hands and dance to the rhythm hey mom, i met this girl that i want you to meet she treats me like a king, and i treat her like a queen she's beautiful on the inside and out, i know you'll love her she's different than all them other girls, she has alot to offer i feel like i'm on top of the world when i wake up to her in the morning i smell fresh roses and get this sensational feeling i kiss her on the lips and i caress her soft skin now i know how much in love you and dad must've been repeat chorus hey girl, i know i've been away for a minute busy as hell with this new job at the studio unit i think i'ma make it big soon, working on my wordplay erase all that doubt boo, you know you're on my mind everyday never can we appart, stuck together like siamese twins i found a new job closer to home, today the rest of our lives begin meet me at the airport at 5, try to get there early now that i've got you here, i just wanted to ask you, will you marry me? repeat chorus |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is just beautiful. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (turns the turn tables with delight) Oh my gosh, this is such a wonderful rap of a debut, sweet friend, I love the beautiful romantic poetry mixed with hip-hop here, your style will be so fun to read, I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much, ooohhhhhh...and be sure to check your E-mail for a very special greeting from all of us here at Passions just for you! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Dragon Mistress Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 289Washington, USA. |
Beautiful, simple beautifl. I must say I'm not into the music much, but as a poet the words here are wonderfully put together! Very sweet, very sweet indeed. Tanya ~*~I'm only a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~ |
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That Playa TL Junior Member
since 2003-02-21
Posts 19Tampa, FL |
Thanks alot  Wow@Mistletoe Angel's welcome message. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Welcome at Passions, and what an entrance you made here......looking forward to read more from your hand. Charisma |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
WELCOME! That's quite a powerful tune you've presented us with as a first post. Hope she read this! |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
Welcome to Passions in Poetry! Your "proposal" was a nice bit. I look forward to reading more of your work. Make sure to check your e-mail for a surprise! -majnu |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
 WELCOME TO PASSIONS IN POETRY This was a very powerful and romantic first post. I hope to read more of your poems. I really hope, too, that you'll like it here among this great big Family Of Friends at PIP. Heart hugs from Ethel.....garysgirl |
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That Playa TL Junior Member
since 2003-02-21
Posts 19Tampa, FL |
Thanks alot to those who replied |
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