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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-02-21 01:17 PM


Sheer Poetry

he touches
my language
in text
of song
soliloquy breath
lyrical speech
word shattering
that’s poetry


"Don't let the mistakes of your past be the journey of your future."


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the_loner_23
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1 posted 2003-02-21 01:18 PM


Beautiful imagery

Cold hands means a warm heart

Robert Frazier
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2 posted 2003-02-21 02:04 PM


...same thoughts about your poetry!

Rf

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3 posted 2003-02-21 02:12 PM


ah..a beautiful delicate handling of phrase here... I enjoyed.


garysgirl
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4 posted 2003-02-21 02:45 PM


Very Beautiful...
DonFurr
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5 posted 2003-02-28 10:38 PM


Wish I was the one
Who breathed that spell
Will I ever learn
to do it so well

"If there is any doubt about it there is no doubt about it." Linnie Stanton


passing shadows
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6 posted 2003-03-01 04:20 PM


whew! very powerful!
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