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gemjop
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0 posted 2003-02-21 11:51 AM



Inky pink horizons crack
the sweetest of blood bleeds from sky
as the next world slips through
and balances itself out with the here and now

Ringlets of billowing fear
dissolved by new worlds promises
that are made with sincere devoted eyes
adjusting to the set of light

Crouching in non submissive curiosity
as emerging enemies ravage the final straw
enraged i have seen enough
territory has boundary only in the mind

i move on.

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

© Copyright 2003 gj - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-02-21 11:55 AM


Methinks I go over to the Members section and add you to my personal favorites. This is fine!

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regards2you
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2 posted 2003-02-21 11:58 AM




Gemma,

I love this!


Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

Aenimal
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3 posted 2003-02-22 02:18 PM


I'm watching too, in amazement to what you've been writing lately. awestruck
the_loner_23
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4 posted 2003-02-22 02:18 PM


I love this

Cold hands means a warm heart

Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2003-02-22 02:37 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Gemma, this is so very touching, sweet friend, I too don't like invasion either sometimes as it can be suffocating! (sigh) This is powerful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Gemma, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-22-2003 02:38 PM).]

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