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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2003-02-21 07:07 AM


Some Girls

Some girls make me happy.
Some girls make me sad.
Some girls give me what I want.
Some girls want to take away
everything I have.
I'm not saying I want perfection.
Although that wouldn't be that bad.
I just want a girl that treats me right
and appreciates the man she has.

JamesLee
February20
2003

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the_loner_23
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1 posted 2003-02-21 11:10 AM


Very truthful words these are.

Cold hands means a warm heart

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2 posted 2003-02-21 03:04 PM



James...

you need a new outlook on life...

tell me some of Hawaii...

poetically of course!  

poohbear19
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3 posted 2003-02-22 02:22 PM


good write.

andrea

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4 posted 2003-02-22 02:24 PM




(sigh) Oh James, this is lovely, sweet friend, fear not for you will find your sweetheart and you will be devoted to her in happiness forever! (big hugggsssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2005-03-26 11:50 PM


Thank each one of you for your kind response...James
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