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Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
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Victoria Australia

0 posted 2003-02-21 03:01 AM


The moles in my golf course
dig shallow graves
to bury
the infant profit
that is ailing
because
of their skilled
spades


Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2003-02-21 03:17 AM


shew! right over my head!
Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2003-02-21 09:06 PM




(big huggssssssss) This is so wonderfully and figuratively detailed, sweet friend, let them see your royal flush and they'll be certain to be out of tricks, this is heartfelt, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kethry, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!'

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Albert J. Allie
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Queens NY
3 posted 2003-02-21 09:09 PM



the_loner_23
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4 posted 2003-02-21 11:27 PM


I really enjoyed this piece.

Cold hands means a warm heart

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