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Kristine
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Mahal Kita!!!

0 posted 2003-02-21 02:21 AM



I'll hold you, I'll love you
I want you to know
I'll hate it, but take it
If you ever go
I know now but somehow
If we ever part
You've given me something
to ease this o' heart
you might go, i don't know
I do know one thing
while you been beside me
you make my heart sing!

Sometimes Love is like awkward poetry, the words may not be just right
but when love comes freely from the heart the message sings!

© Copyright 2003 Kristine - All Rights Reserved
Fatman
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1 posted 2003-02-21 02:40 AM


Very sweet.
passing shadows
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2 posted 2003-02-21 03:26 AM


nice little diddy!
Cerenity
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3 posted 2003-02-22 05:12 AM


Hi Kritine,

Very much enjoyed,

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



Ericc
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4 posted 2003-02-22 10:21 AM


Poetry from the heart is always great poetry.
This is sweet.
Eric

Albert J. Allie
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5 posted 2003-02-22 11:56 AM


Kristine! Just wonderful!!!


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6 posted 2003-02-22 05:42 PM




(smiles) Oh Kristine, this is soooooo romantic, sweet friend, I wish for your heart to always sing like a canary, yay, this is beautiful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristine, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Kethry
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7 posted 2003-02-22 05:52 PM


This message sings!
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Kristine
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Mahal Kita!!!
8 posted 2003-02-24 09:03 AM


Oh, thank you guys for making my day!

Sometimes Love is like awkward poetry, the words may not be just right
but when love comes freely from the heart the message sings!

Kristine
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since 2002-10-30
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Mahal Kita!!!
9 posted 2003-03-07 08:54 AM


Sometimes Love is like awkward poetry, the words may not be just right
but when love comes freely from the heart the message sings!

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10 posted 2003-03-07 09:49 AM


well now... enjoyed this... and the light sense of acceptance it brings to the pages..

nice....


Kristine
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11 posted 2003-03-09 02:12 AM



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