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There once, upon a moment
That sifted through your fingers
And fell upon my thighs

In stirs of wiser words
Between my quivered knees
And drifts mount by surprise

Until an irritant between
These rice thin walls to bed
And sleepless syllables demise

There once, in sweet pea blooms
Between your fingers fond a pearl
And still, but fear falls lithe and dies

Copyright Kkh 2/20/03
© Copyright 2003 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
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Beautiful imagery

Cold hands means a warm heart

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(smiles) Oh Kathleen, this is lovely, sweet friend, I love it, and may that pearl always be worn proudly on that destined finger, yay! (big hugggsssssss) I love the whimsically romantic feel of your poem, sweet friend, yay, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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Kathleen, this is so beautiful......

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel GG~  
                  

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Very beautiful.
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wow! awesome!
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creative and unique, your style of weaving
these thoughts of love and its many complexities together
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Done very nicely in your style...with such
beauty intertwined...  Well done TD..
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Yes, have to agree with everyone.
Beautiful!


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Very Much Enjoyed

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